Happy JuC Day 2006! FIC: Something Different

[foxmonkey]

First off, Happy JuC Day! Sings: It's the most wonderful time of the year... My apologies to the songwriter. Anyway! JuC Day means JuC fic!

This is new only in the sense that no one has ever read it. It's a longish part of something that was supposed to be much, much, much longer, something I realize now will probably never be finished. It stands on its own though, so here it is. The story takes place on the night of Justin's solo performance at the VMAs.

Something Different, by foxmonkey

Comments

[darkseaglass.livejournal.com]

Oh, hell. That was sexy and scary in a way, and different. It's a different JC than I'm used to. I like him. Very much so. And take-charge Justin. And Chris's mouth. Woo.

I liked the parts with the girl, how she eats pop boys for breakfast. You walk this lovely fine line between using a lot of colloqialisms and slang to make it sound current and young, but without drawing attention to yourself in the process--it's just there in an seemingly effortless way, and not like you're trying.

...something I realize now will probably never be finished.

:-( Sorry to hear that.

[foxmonkey.livejournal.com]

You walk this lovely fine line between using a lot of colloqialisms and slang to make it sound current and young, but without drawing attention to yourself in the process--it's just there in an seemingly effortless way, and not like you're trying.

Wow, thank you, what a lovely compliment! That's one of the things I appreciate most when I read, natural-sounding dialogue, so I'm glad it works in my own fic.

...something I realize now will probably never be finished.

:-( Sorry to hear that.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I may yet re-work the remaining bits so that I can post everything I've written so far.