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So, a few weeks ago I posted this in my journal, about writing a story where JC and Justin were having, to quote Chris in Rhys' Irreplaceable, "a private love affair."

And in email to Scotty about two seconds ago, I wrote, "The phrasing of that just slugged me in the head and wouldn't let me go. I'd love to write a story like that, where Justin and JC being together was just that, a private love affair. I can't even articulate how gorgeous I think that is."

What follows is my attempt to tell that story.

Date: 2002-08-10 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] ex_halo669
oooh yes. i like a really lot.

your descriptions of what Chris is hearing are wonderful...i was actually visualisig JC punching his pillow as i read it. (or that could me just being a freak, because for some reason that part really jumped out at me. the...atmosphere of it...Chris hearing it down the end of the phone.) but yeah...the flutter of the sheets, the thump of his jeans on the floor...his voice wavering as he walked up the stairs....all good, good stuff. really got my brain ticking over.

can't wait to read more.

[hopefully this is coherent. i'm only 3/4 way through my first coffee of the day after being up until 3.30am. gaaaaah.]

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