Ha! You started reading it, too. (If we're in fact thinking of the same story.) I'll admit it, I liked the first couple chapters because I thought, "Wow, this is kind of new and refreshing," because of the different style and introspective!Justin. But then it all started to go downhill. Part of the blah feeling was because so much was updated at a time - I felt like I was literally wading through a thick swamp trying to get to the end. The constant non-forward action really bugged me, too. Nothing was HAPPENING. It was just repetition of the same "conflict" over and over again for like, 200k.
But for real, mine and Joie's number one blah-factor right now is too many peripheral characters! Why why why put all these people in who serve no purpose? Why? Why? WHY?
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Date: 2003-04-06 06:19 pm (UTC)But for real, mine and Joie's number one blah-factor right now is too many peripheral characters! Why why why put all these people in who serve no purpose? Why? Why? WHY?