Kiss, by foxmonkey
Dec. 21st, 2003 04:35 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
foxmonkeyThanks to ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
scot_ty for letting me borrow her eyes, and for the fresh perspective. You're fabulous. :-)
This one's been out there for a while, just waiting to be finished. First started thinking about it in early August, and now here it is, five months later. Ye gods, I'm slow.
In plain but legible html at my site, or you can read it here!
Kiss me baby, make me new.
scot_ty for letting me borrow her eyes, and for the fresh perspective. You're fabulous. :-)This one's been out there for a while, just waiting to be finished. First started thinking about it in early August, and now here it is, five months later. Ye gods, I'm slow.
In plain but legible html at my site, or you can read it here!
Kiss me baby, make me new.
![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
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Date: 2003-12-21 02:38 pm (UTC)*love* it!
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Date: 2003-12-21 03:12 pm (UTC)i loved every word.
--lola
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Date: 2003-12-21 03:56 pm (UTC)::does a little dance::
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Date: 2003-12-22 01:15 am (UTC)Such an intense paragraph for me, because it agrees with my ideas of Justin, how he thinks, is a smidge needy, totally how I sees Justin falling for JC, obvious physical looks and chemistry aside. ;-) Hee! You write them with such a poised kind of modesty, which mama likes. Ahh, and the way they kiss is so prefect to me, neither intends to bend for the other, so they collide at full speed, seatbelts totally *off*! Which is the only way it could be, you know, no top/bottom nonsense in this pairing, nope, it's all equality, baby! This be really great piece of work you got here, yes ma'am.
Alls *I* want for Christmas is to write like Mrs. Foxmokey, two front teeth be damned!
Happy holidays, Foxmonkey! :-D
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Date: 2003-12-22 02:58 am (UTC)I really like the way it's not all heart wrenching angst, or romantic roses, but instead genuinely sweet. It was also hot, which is always good.
Strawberries and 'is this some freaky fling or is it going on tour with us?' = great.
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Date: 2003-12-23 05:45 am (UTC)Hee!
Thank you so much for sharing :)
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Date: 2003-12-23 07:37 am (UTC)[And I may be a one-track-minded obbsessive, because the little flash of reasure-me-Chris at the end made me grin]
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