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foxmonkey ([personal profile] foxmonkey) wrote2003-12-21 04:35 pm
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Kiss, by foxmonkey

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] scot_ty for letting me borrow her eyes, and for the fresh perspective. You're fabulous. :-)

This one's been out there for a while, just waiting to be finished. First started thinking about it in early August, and now here it is, five months later. Ye gods, I'm slow.

In plain but legible html at my site, or you can read it here!

Kiss me baby, make me new.

[identity profile] saturn92103.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved it, Fox. Sweet and thoughtful and a wonderful read.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved it, Fox. Sweet and thoughtful and a wonderful read.

Thank you, m' dear. Glad you liked it. :-)

[identity profile] fuskeez.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that was wonderful. Palpable. And if I was the annoying sort, I'd beg for a sequel. :)

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that was wonderful. Palpable. And if I was the annoying sort, I'd beg for a sequel. :)

LOL! Thank you! Well, we have a new drop date and one of these days *something* has to happen, right? I wouldn't be surprised if I got the hankering to visit this universe again. :-)

[identity profile] lisachasez.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent. Just...perfectly excellent.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent. Just...perfectly excellent.

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :-)
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[personal profile] drunkoffthestars 2003-12-21 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
[happysigh] that was really sweet. makes me all ooshy inside!

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
[happysigh] that was really sweet. makes me all ooshy inside!

Thank you! JC and Justin do that to me. :-)
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[identity profile] rosebee.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmmmmmmmm...

*love* it!

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmmmmmmmm...*love* it!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[identity profile] mirroredimage.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
That made me smile. Such a wonderful read and you captured them beautifully and God, I love you Fox. :o) *kisskiss*

[identity profile] tallories.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Heyyy... nice icon! ;D And [livejournal.com profile] foxmonkey, nice story.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
And foxmonkey, nice story.

Thankee! It was one of the images that got in my brain and refused to leave. Mmmm, JuC kissing. Now if we could just get it on video...

[identity profile] tallories.livejournal.com 2003-12-24 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
Isn't it?

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Such a wonderful read and you captured them beautifully and God, I love you Fox. :o) *kisskiss*

Thank you, thank you! ::smooches:: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :-)

[identity profile] charlidos.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
That was very lovely and sweet. Made me all warm and mushy inside. Just what I needed. Thanks for a wonderful read. :)

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
That was very lovely and sweet. Made me all warm and mushy inside. Just what I needed. Thanks for a wonderful read. :)

Thank you! I love my boys. I've been wanting to give JC a big hug, so I had Justin do it for me. With a litle kissing on the side. ;-)

[identity profile] virgulesmith.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Rahhh! That was nice. Very nice. Mmmm Strawberries and JC, where do I order that?

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Rahhh! That was nice.

Thank you!


Mmmm Strawberries and JC, where do I order that?

LOL! Yeah, your order is right behind mine. ;-)

[identity profile] babygotbass.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, that was just wonderful.
i loved every word.
--lola

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, that was just wonderful. i loved every word.

Thank you! With JC and Justin for inspiration, I couldn't go wrong. Love them so much! I'm glad that you liked it. :-)

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
My blushing bride! I do! I do! ::smooch::

hee hee hee
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[personal profile] copracat 2003-12-21 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*g*

::does a little dance::

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
::does a little dance::

::does a little dance with you:: Now all we need are JC and Justin shakin' their groove thangs. ;-)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, so lovely, and just what I needed.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, so lovely, and just what I needed.

Thank you! Glad I could be of service. :-)

[identity profile] brighton-girl.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
It's really wonderful, just a beautiful piece. What a gift you have given us. Thank you.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
It's really wonderful, just a beautiful piece. What a gift you have given us. Thank you.

Thank *you* for such lovely words! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[identity profile] skewedview.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
That was lovely. Like everything you write, just beautiful.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
That was lovely. Like everything you write, just beautiful.


Thank you, such a lovely compliment. :-) I'm glad you liked the story.

[identity profile] bartinigirl03.livejournal.com 2003-12-21 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
::sigh:: Just so sweet.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
::sigh:: Just so sweet.

Thank you! :-)

[identity profile] kcchiefs91.livejournal.com 2003-12-22 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
oh such a lovely story. JC definitely needs some loving after all the crap Jive has done to him, and no one better to give it to him then Justin. heh.

[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
JC definitely needs some loving after all the crap Jive has done to him, and no one better to give it to him then Justin.

Mmmm, that's exactly what I thought, too. :-D I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] shaggyncurly.livejournal.com 2003-12-22 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
He's missed this. He's had relationships since she and he broke up, but it's been a long time since he's been with someone who knows him on a near molecular level. He's drunk with it, craves it. He needs it.

Such an intense paragraph for me, because it agrees with my ideas of Justin, how he thinks, is a smidge needy, totally how I sees Justin falling for JC, obvious physical looks and chemistry aside. ;-) Hee! You write them with such a poised kind of modesty, which mama likes. Ahh, and the way they kiss is so prefect to me, neither intends to bend for the other, so they collide at full speed, seatbelts totally *off*! Which is the only way it could be, you know, no top/bottom nonsense in this pairing, nope, it's all equality, baby! This be really great piece of work you got here, yes ma'am.

Alls *I* want for Christmas is to write like Mrs. Foxmokey, two front teeth be damned!

Happy holidays, Foxmonkey! :-D


[identity profile] foxmonkey.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Ska-wee, thank you for the compliments! ::blush::

This be really great piece of work you got here, yes ma'am. Happy holidays, Foxmonkey! :-D

Thank you, darlin', I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And happy holidays to you, too. ::hugs::

[identity profile] dallin.livejournal.com 2003-12-22 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
I love it. Just. So. Much.

I really like the way it's not all heart wrenching angst, or romantic roses, but instead genuinely sweet. It was also hot, which is always good.

Strawberries and 'is this some freaky fling or is it going on tour with us?' = great.

[identity profile] schizojuc.livejournal.com 2003-12-22 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
I love that! Champagne flavored, strawberry tinted JuC kisses! YUM! I can definitely see a conversation like that take place! Yep!

[identity profile] diggybear.livejournal.com 2003-12-22 06:53 am (UTC)(link)
That was sweet. :) I loved it dearly. :)

[identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
Ooohhhh, man, that was lovely. *happy sigh* Sweet and sexy and caring. Loved the little interaction with Chris at the end, too. "don't mind me, I just live here."

Hee!

Thank you so much for sharing :)

[identity profile] twinbing.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man. Perfection. I mean from the descriptions to the tone of their dialogue. Characterization is wonderful too. It feels so effortless. Wonderful. Really wonderful.

[identity profile] ephemera.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 07:37 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm that is lovely - sense-heavy somehow. Taste it, feel it as well as see it.

[And I may be a one-track-minded obbsessive, because the little flash of reasure-me-Chris at the end made me grin]

[identity profile] keenpeach.livejournal.com 2003-12-23 08:34 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhh. This was really wonderful to read. Sweet and hot, yes, and kind of peaceful underneath. Love it.

[identity profile] coolwhipdiva.livejournal.com 2004-01-02 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhh, I just love this. I totally forgot to check what stories aside from SeSa came out while I was computerless on vacation, and wow am I glad I went back today to check. This is just so sweet and sexy, with that steady undercurrent of love in it and just... yeah. Good stuff.